shirafor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico Epsilon]

Oh jeez, I just got it

I've seen this maybe 20 times, and I only now just got the joke with the 10 and -12 on his door. Clever.

BiffTheTimid responds:

That makes you the second person out of 776 reviews that noticed that. Congratulations. You win a review response, w00t~!

[Spoiler fights Zombies]

Thank you for uploading this

I'm actually trying to enter flash submissions for an OCT, and I've never made a flash animation, nor am I much of an artist, so I'm suffering through it right now. This is still higher quality than something I could make, but it's nice to see how much you've improved, and that gives me a bit of hope for my own future works. Thank you again for uploading this, I intend to turn it into inspiration for myself.

[Pokemon Hunter]

Amazing

This is absolutely amazing. Very, very well done. I'm a bit interested to know how long it took you to make this. Also, first easter egg was cute, second was deadly epic. Great, great job.

[Code:Z (pt1)]

Umm

I think the movie was too small. I could barely see anything, and the text was cut off a lot. Was the resolution set right? I didn't see much action.

[Wolf Of City]

Mm, asi asi.

Si, la animacion puede ser mejor, pero me gustaron mucho la musica y el aspecto serio. Necesita ser mas largo, y un poco mas claro; tenia un problema en entenderlo completemente.

(Lo siento si mi español es malo, pero me encanta la idioma, y hace unos meses que no he practicado. Tambien queria escribir una reseña en español :P)

LonelyAngel responds:

si la animacion es muy mala u_u, pero ire mejorando todo xD
y solo lo lanze asi porque ya queria sacar algo, con lo que tubiera estaba agusto yo xD

[Go Bulbasaur!!]

Nice style

It looks really nice, and I don't think that making things look nice will be a big problem for you. You need to take the next step though: add in a story, add in sounds/music (will make a big difference), make it complete thing rather than a pointless animation. I'm confident you can do this well, seeing how nice this looks.

[E-Motions]

Confused

I'm confused as to what this flash is supposed to be. The art is very nice, looks great, there's just no story.